Monday, 19 September 2016

M&M farm experiment goes bad.



There is nothing like a morning breeze with the cows.
"Arghh they're all so big!
Don't touch me with your slimy nose or else!
You're so close I'm felling claustrophobic. Stand back you evil monster!" Says M&M in fright.
"Calm down dude. We are just look to see if you're safe to stay." Mikki says.
"Trust me I am a good evil monster." M&M says letting his secret out.
"ATTACK!" Mikki yells!


By Mikayla

10 comments:

  1. Hi Kumara School, I'm Emma from Paroa
    I like your piece of writing and that you added some pictures
    could you next time please minimize the pictures more.

    Check out my blog at http://paroagreyemmab.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Hi i'm Alisi from Wesley Primary School I really like the way you made it very funny and interesting to read.This reminds me of when i went to the farm and I called the cows monsters because they were so huge.Maybe next time you could write a bit more about your journey.

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  3. Hi my name is Alisi from Wesley Primary School I like the way you made it very funny and interesting.This reminds me of when I went a farm and I called the cows monsters because the were huge.Maybe next time you could write a bit more.

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  4. hi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.

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  5. hi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.

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  6. hi my name is dallas and i am from wesley primary school i like the way that you put the toy on the grass and its just there really funny.

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  7. h my name is viliami and i am from wesley primary school and i really like how you put the toy on the grass and looks a bit fun for the cows

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  8. Hi my name is anaseini and i am a year 5 at Wesley primary school. I like the way you put the little statue of the beaver standing on the grass. it made me think of when i made a scarecrow when i was little. maybe next time you could show a picture of the cows. running around the field.

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  9. Hi there my name is Paula and i am a student from room 3 in Wesley Primary School. I really like how you named your own toy M&M. It made me think of my little toy when i was a small kid. Have u thought about telling everyone why you made it?

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  10. Hi there my name is Paula and i am a student from room 3 in Wesley Primary School. I really like how you named your own toy M&M. It made me think of my little toy when i was a small kid. Have u thought about telling everyone why you made it?

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